Ok, so I have set out to describe my novel, “a life of inches” in 140 characters or less as part of a contest put on by this blog by @Shelley_Watters. Please feel free to comment and criticize. I strongly encourage positive and negative feedback. If you are an author I strongly suggest you check out her blog and twitter. There is a lot of info to be read there.
Title: a life of inches
Genre: General fiction
Word count: 88,000
A love triangle plays out on a baseball diamond as Ryan squares off with injury, addiction, and the luckiest man alive for Molly’s heart.
So this is version 4.0 thanks to all who have offered feedback so far! Please keep it coming. This has been a great experience thus far, and I can’t wait to read some of the books I have read about from your pitches.
here are older drafts for comparison:
a love triangle plays out around a baseball diamond as three friends square off to determine who will stand in the winner’s circle
a love triangle plays out around a baseball diamond as ryan squares off against Woodie to win Molly’s heart.